tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5959457331318158029.post6430453757947895455..comments2023-05-30T08:29:25.044-07:00Comments on Hiding in the mind: AmericaImagitexthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02201304258892978562noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5959457331318158029.post-67391547865062316572008-09-30T17:36:00.000-07:002008-09-30T17:36:00.000-07:00very accurate.very accurate.Rosalindhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17455671568552395896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5959457331318158029.post-66046400915317251642008-09-21T18:19:00.000-07:002008-09-21T18:19:00.000-07:00Nice. Let's see more poetry! I like your word cho...Nice. Let's see more poetry! I like your word choice "vibrant" and "retreating" (where most would have said "receding"). Very nice. I feel your angst over the mess you've inherited.brendahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13066029069357117246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5959457331318158029.post-52654811489515789902008-09-20T20:08:00.000-07:002008-09-20T20:08:00.000-07:00Thanks for sharing your poem. I think it's creativ...Thanks for sharing your poem. I think it's creative tooEldon and Janeil Olsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12980396647019935771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5959457331318158029.post-15412396918568878572008-09-20T19:15:00.000-07:002008-09-20T19:15:00.000-07:00You wanna fight about it?! ;)You wanna fight about it?! ;)Sweet Polly Purebredhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16208606944815449212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5959457331318158029.post-71721132941026839592008-09-20T13:53:00.000-07:002008-09-20T13:53:00.000-07:00Creative thinkers can believe what they want. I j...Creative thinkers can believe what they want. I just can't believe you when you say that. Well maybe just a little.Imagitexthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02201304258892978562noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5959457331318158029.post-12409849907222716262008-09-20T12:30:00.000-07:002008-09-20T12:30:00.000-07:00The dictionary defines criticism as "a judgment or...The dictionary defines criticism as "a judgment or review." Most people associate criticism with negative comments only, but criticism can also be positive. I enjoyed your poem and it surprised me, because it was not what I expected. You are a creative thinker. BELIEVE IT!Sweet Polly Purebredhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16208606944815449212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5959457331318158029.post-51475000917411329162008-09-19T17:30:00.000-07:002008-09-19T17:30:00.000-07:00I'm still having a hard time believing you. Just ...I'm still having a hard time believing you. Just like when you said you were prowd of me for writing. I couldn't have gotten it publish even if I wanted it to be. People would say that critasium was better and now I believe them. Please tell me something that is wrong with it.Imagitexthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02201304258892978562noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5959457331318158029.post-23546376043719963392008-09-19T16:08:00.000-07:002008-09-19T16:08:00.000-07:00Ms. Rivett was given a model poem and asked to com...Ms. Rivett was given a model poem and asked to come up with quality adjectives to make her own poem. Me? I would have just "filled in the blanks" but not Lynn! She put her own twist on it. She was afraid that I was going to make her redo it, but I was impressed with her creativity.Sweet Polly Purebredhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16208606944815449212noreply@blogger.com